i want to share this with all of you

lolad
lolad Member Posts: 670
edited March 2014 in Breast Cancer #1
I have gotten back into the habbit of writing poems to help release feelings and wanted to share the latest one with all of you.
Oh how can this all be
Is the disease still inside of me
what kind of hell is there still to come
where did it all come from
am i being taught a lesson
for all he mistakes i have made
should i fight it off with the medicine
or do i just sit back and wait
oh the hell that my familys been thru
the fire, the abuse and my stupid mistakes
how much longer do i have to feel blue
hello there! I think im awake
is god just wanting my attention
or is it because of something ive done
i pray all the time for some kind of redemption
and to that this disease has not won
i will not let this beat me
i do still have my faith in the lord
i know one day that i will be free
and no longer be bound by this chord
i know i'll see my children grow
so far they've made me proud
my children all just make me glow
i know that im going to stick around
Brandon is my oldest joy
how kind his heart can be
how proud i am of my boy
how happy he makes me
Zachary is the middle joy
a heart thats filled with gold
also proud of my second boy
i know he will be there when i grow old
Megan is my baby girl
how her smile beautiful and bright
she like the other two make my world
i know because of them i will fight
i will win the battle
it will not beat me
i may right now feel like i am all rattled
but someday soon i will be free

laura

Comments

  • DianeBC
    DianeBC Member Posts: 3,881 Member
    #2
    Yes, you will be free of bc!
    Yes, you will be free of bc! You are an excellent writer! Love your poem!

    Thanks for sharing it with us!

    Hugs, Diane
  • Kat11
    Kat11 Member Posts: 1,931 Member
    #3
    DianeBC said:

    Yes, you will be free of bc!
    Yes, you will be free of bc! You are an excellent writer! Love your poem!

    Thanks for sharing it with us!

    Hugs, Diane

    Beautiful, well said.

    Beautiful, well said.
  • Akiss4me
    Akiss4me Member Posts: 2,188
    #4
    Bravo Laura!!
    Everyday I am amazed at the talent on this site. Who knew so many of us had talent? Thanks for sharing your poem. I enjoyed reading it. :) Pammy
  • padee6339
    padee6339 Member Posts: 763
    #5
    Beautiful
    Thank you for sharing what is in your heart and soul. You express feelings most of us have. Thanks!
    Pat
  • susie09
    susie09 Member Posts: 2,930
    #6
    padee6339 said:

    Beautiful
    Thank you for sharing what is in your heart and soul. You express feelings most of us have. Thanks!
    Pat

    Thanks for this beautiful
    Thanks for this beautiful poem!
  • tommaseena
    tommaseena Member Posts: 1,769
    #7
    susie09 said:

    Thanks for this beautiful
    Thanks for this beautiful poem!

    Wonderful
    That was a wonderful poem.
    Loved it.
    Margo
  • survivorbc09
    survivorbc09 Member Posts: 4,374 Member
    #8
    tommaseena said:

    Wonderful
    That was a wonderful poem.
    Loved it.
    Margo

    That was an amazing
    That was an amazing beautiful poem! You are very talented and creative.

    Thanks for posting it for us!
  • Noel
    Noel Member Posts: 3,095 Member
    #9
    survivorbc09 said:

    That was an amazing
    That was an amazing beautiful poem! You are very talented and creative.

    Thanks for posting it for us!

    WOW! That is a beautiful
    WOW! That is a beautiful poem! Love it! Thanks!
  • rjjj
    rjjj Member Posts: 1,822 Member
    #10
    Noel said:

    WOW! That is a beautiful
    WOW! That is a beautiful poem! Love it! Thanks!

    Thanks
    I will copy and save, hugs, jackie
  • Kayla1
    Kayla1 Member Posts: 101
    #11
    rjjj said:

    Thanks
    I will copy and save, hugs, jackie

    Wow, what a beautiful poem!
    Wow, what a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing.
    K

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